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Marmalade Jamming by ~phewd:iconphewd:



Marmalade Jam on the window sill
and I don't know how it got there.
I've torn these jeans so many times
it feels as though they're not there.

I know that you've been trying,
I know that you've been crying,
But for what reason I'll never know.

He could have spared the heart attack
if he'd just got some fresh air.
You say to me 'lets double back',
'cause it feels we're getting no where.

They've been talking about you at the station -
feeding they're frustrations.
Never let those people drag you down.

They don't have good intentions;
They can feel their redemptions.
The only thing they have going is gone.

Marmalade Jam on the window sill,
still, and going no where.
Don't mend these jeans;
they're split at the seems
I'll just buy a new pair.
©2005-2009 ~phewd
:iconphewd:

Author's Comments

'Marmalade Jamming' is essentially a concept thought of by my friend Eric (~Mrsoap) and I. This piece is more or less about optimism; it is probably one of my most poetic pieces to date.

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:iconmrsoap:
"Don't mend these jeans;
they're split at the seems
I'll just buy a new pair."

This made me laugh out loud.

This is an awesome song. I'd totally jam to this.
:iconhappy-pill:
It's absolutely perfect, I love it.
:iconih8avril:
This is the reason why I said aggggges ago at some party that I always read your deviations, although they can be few and far between, they are always so good. Every word fits and it flows so well. I really like this one particularly. :+fav:

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nobody ever suspects the butterfly... :butterflytwo:
:iconphewd:
I thin kit was jo's party.

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Jesus came from outerspace and he travelled from beyond the stars - he came down for peace on earth and he left in a second hand car.
:iconih8avril:
Most likely yes

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nobody ever suspects the butterfly... :butterflytwo:
:iconnoface42:
LOVING IT!

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"The Sorrow in Death is Also the Joy in Rebirth"
-SEELE Leader Keel Lorenz, from the anime and manga Neon Genesis Evagelion.
I am LIVIO THE DOUBLE FANG in the DA Trigun Crew! [link]
~DJ-Fanclub

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